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-         \newcommand{\mytext}{During the antisocial years of the COVID-19 pandemic, my endless YouTube bingeing
-            led me into
-            accidentally discovering how computers work at a low level. The moment I learned the fascinating 
-            marvel of engineering that is a computer, I immediately fell in love with Computer Science.
+         \newcommand{\mytext}{It was during a COVID-19 YouTube binge where I was first introduced to the art of modern 
+            computer. After stumbling into a rabbit hole of videos explaining the inner-workings of a machine,
+             I immediately fell in love with Computer Science.
             Over the years, I have also developed a specialized interest in signal processing and its applications.
             My curiousity in this topic stems from my first Math Club meeting in 9th grade, where a senior officer
-            had explained the fascinating science of how radio signals are transmitted and received using Fourier transforms
-            (as an application of calulus).
+            had explained the fascinating science of how radio signals are transmitted and received using Fourier transforms.
             These concepts overlapped with my learning of fascinating Calculus concepts, and I was amazed at how signals can 
             be analyzed and processed. Today, the major question that excites me within the field of Signal Processing is how to effectively
             adapt digital signal processing and machine learning for real-time resource-constrained embedded systems.