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         From PWM control to I2C communication, I slowly worked up the layers of abstraction, eventually
         coming to the software that I was responsible to write. Today, I continue my pursuit of deep technical knowledge 
         through my independent research projects. In my ninth grade, I decided to grasp the fascinating concept of a 
-        thermoelectric generator. My research eventually culminated in a novel prototype that utilized the fascinating 
-        Seebeck effect to automatically stir a cooking pot. The following year, I dove into high-level signal processing
+        thermoelectric generator. The following year, I completely shifted focus, doving into high-level signal processing
         and machine learning concepts to develop GaitGuardian, my ISEF-winning Parkinson's research project. 
         Through these experiences, I have learned that true mastery comes from understanding the layers beneath the surface,
         which is why I am committed to this lifelong goal of deep technical knowledge. As I continue to uncover more 
         information, I continue pursuing this goal through passion projects. My latest endeavor of hosting a full 
         server on an old chromebook is pushing me to learn Linux system administration, networking, and cybersecurity. The final 
-        website code is the same, but the knowledge I gain from understanding the server-side is invaluable. It is with this goal 
-        in mind that I approach RSI, eager to learn from experts and deepen my understanding of computer science.}
+        result is the same as a Replit fork, but the knowledge I gain from understanding the server-side is invaluable. It is with this goal 
+        in mind that I approach RSI, eager to learn from experts and deepen my understanding of computer science.
+        \\\\
+        My Parkinson's research was also started for this very purpose: to learn an understand the complex fields of
+        signal processing and machine learning with a senior friend of mine. However, it quickly evolved into a mission 
+        to use my limited knowledge to make a real-world impact. During our presentation at the Dallas Science and Engineering 
+        Fair, a judge approached us after our presentation and shared that his father suffered from Parkinson's disease. I didn't 
+        think much of it at the time, but when we emailed the Dallas Area Parkinson's Society (DAPS) to share our findings,
+        the overwhelming response from patients and caregivers made me realize the true potential of our work. Two months later,
+        a close family friend was diagnosed with early-onset Parkinson's, and I realized the hope that research brings to people. 
+        Therein lies my second long-term goal: use my knowledge to improve the human condition through impactful research. 
+        \\\\
+        Although my skillset is still limited, my goal is to continue to push the boundaries of technological applications to 
+        eventually benefit humanity. Not only am I interested in healthcare applications like GaitGuardian, but I am also fascinated 
+        by the potential of robotics and software to improve everyday life. For example, I was particularly piqued by the 
+        recent advancements in autonomous pathing of multiple agents, as I see huge potential for applications in warehouse automation, 
+        constricution, and even self-driving cars. Be it through hardware, software, or a combination of both, I am committed to
+        expand my knowledge and use it to make a positive impact on the world. RSI represents a crucial step in this journey, allowing me 
+        to work on relevant research that pushes the boundaries of technology. As a devout Hindu, the Vibuthi (cow ash) 
+        I apply to my forehead reminds me that all humans will eventually unite with the Earth,
+         and I want to be remembered for leaving a positive mark on humanity before I do. 
+        \\\\
+        My final long-term goal is to encourage and inspire the next generation of students to pursue STEM. As someone who 
+        has experienced the transformative power of a good teacher firsthand, I am passionate about helping 
+        others discover the joy of learning. After realizing that a teacher can change my perception on a subject itself, 
+        I committed myself to tutoring and helping others. Whether it is through robotics outreach or through my school's 
+        ACE tutoring club, I have always sought to share my knowledge and enthusiasm for STEM with others. I hope RSI presents me 
+        with an opportunity to further this goal by providing me world-class mentorship and resources, which I can then 
+        use to benefit others in the same way RSI will benefit me.
+        }