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         From PWM control to I2C communication, I slowly worked up the layers of abstraction, eventually
         coming to the software that I was responsible to write. Today, I continue my pursuit of deep technical knowledge 
         through my independent research projects. In my ninth grade, I decided to grasp the fascinating concept of a 
-        thermoelectric generator. The following year, I completely shifted focus, doving into high-level signal processing
+        thermoelectric generator in my research. The following year, I completely shifted focus, diving into 
-        and machine learning concepts to develop GaitGuardian, my ISEF-winning Parkinson's research project. 
+        high-level signal processing
+        and machine learning concepts. 
         Through these experiences, I have learned that true mastery comes from understanding the layers beneath the surface,
         which is why I am committed to this lifelong goal of deep technical knowledge. As I continue to uncover more 
         information, I continue pursuing this goal through passion projects. My latest endeavor of hosting a full 
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             Together, we recreated iconic film music with precision, and all proceeds went to charity. 
             As the keyboard player, I didn’t just perform; I sculpted the sounds, blending technical skill with 
             creative vision. Performing in two concerts, which collectively raised over \$300,000 for charity,
-             showed me how creativity can make tangible impact. Not only was I expressing myself, I was 
+            showed me how creativity can make tangible impact. Not only was I expressing myself, I was 
-             helping my community. Now, as I prepare for my third concert, I am continuing to fuse music and 
+            helping my community. Now, as I prepare for my third concert, I am continuing to fuse music and 
-             technology. I built a real-time music server that optimizes bitrate to rival commercial platforms, 
+            technology. Using my server-side knowledge to develop a music streaming service, I am able to
-             combining my passions in a way that transforms both performance and experience.
+            express my creativity in a positive manner by combining my talents and passsions.
+            \\\\
+            As much as I had collborated in High Octavez, I would collaborate more in my studies. From 
+            the moment I entered high school, my friends and I formed a joint study circle where 
+            we would discuss upcoming assignments and tests. Before we learned the biological concept of 
+            mutualism, we were practicing it through 10 PM Discord calls. Midway thorugh ninth grade, I added 
+            another friend to our group chat...then two. Within a matter of 30 minutes, we had invited over 
+            30 people to join our newly made study server for the Plano East Class of 2027. Before long, 
+            rules had to be set, and as the server owner, I had made it clear that no swearing would be 
+            allowed. For obvious reasons, this did not sit well with my peers, and moderation quickly became 
+            a nightmare. For rogue non-Plano East students invading the server to a perpetual spew of racial 
+            slurs, we were quickly overwhelmed. Every loophole was penetrated; every vulnerability was exploited.
+            At that exact moment, I began using my coding skills to our advantage, developing Discord bots to 
+            manage moderation. I began outsourcing work to other moderators and study guides, leading 
+            a group of nearly 200 members to 
+             Before long, all members required school ID-based verification, and I had
+            integrated AI into moderation to prevent penetration. At the end of my 10th grade, nearly 60%
+            of my class had joined the server. By hosting study sessions and posting valuable studying 
+            resources, my server had gained the trust of not just students but teachers alike. In fact, 
+            our human geography teacher hosted a last-minute AP exam study session through the server
+